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lindiana
lindiana
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Tears
Deep powerful tears
Rung from her soul
From pain so great
Overwhelming
Solid drops formed a pool
She ached to drown herself in it
To stifle the screams that welled up
From inside her agony-filled body
Surrounding her
The sticky fluid of grief
Pulling her down
Enveloping her like fog
Pain
So bleak and unforgiving
That everything she ate
Tasted sour and bitter
Even the sweetest of things
The acridness lingering
Until she spat it out
And as she wallowed
In her misery
Her mind hollow
And empty of thought
Except how to get through this
Mind-numbing suffering,
One clear image
Her green eyes blurred with tears
Dragged from a heart broken
Filled with shattered glass
She saw you right before her
Fucking Lydia

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lindiana
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lindiana
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Raw naked pain ~ and with that ending, have to read twice so the pain's more real.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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Damn I wasnt first

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
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Really felt the overwhelming anguish and despair throughout.

always_smilingalways_smilingalmost 19 years ago
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Powerfully RAW! Excellent poetry! I probably would've broken this up into stanzas, but, damn, I felt this one.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
excellent

I don't have audio but the read was wonderful, I enjoyed your tail too, I meant tale <looking forward to it surfacing. (~_~)

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