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A palette of colors the pansies bloom,
while the sky hangs a rainbow
over a sea of tranquil blue.

Turquoise garnish on olive skin
while pearls sparkle
near silvers trend.

A handed rose of lustful red
while silken hair dances in wind
over a dress held by thread.

Standing under the chandelier fixture
by marble taken for granite
can your mind paint this picture.

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UnseenChagrinUnseenChagrinalmost 20 years ago
I feel like Picasso

I love your play on words. You are quite talented!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
An interesting play on the marble and granite

in this interesting poem. The rhyme in the last stanza felt a bit forced, but otherwise this was very good.

jim : )

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
granted

"Turquoise garnish on olive skin"

This is an interesting and original line!

"by marble taken for granite"

I like this. Very clever.

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