painting poems

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I write like a painter

standing up
in my garage
where the light
isn't the best
but who needs
good light to
write anyway.

I constantly search for
meaning and deep form

choosing newspapers
or the insides of
used cigarette packs
for my canvasses.

Call it a vertical build
Coit Tower on drugs

shaped slightly atilt
just the way I stand
leaning upon shelf
in cluttered garage
with pen in hand

painting poems.

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WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
Oh, this is good, steve

Love the phrase about writing like a painter, and love the description of how you do it. Great, little poem.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

I enjoyed it, got a kick out of:

'Call it a vertical build

Coit Tower on drugs'

ty,BD

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
mention

this poem mentioned on the thread new poem reviews

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
painting poems

well you got me to thinking... cause I have a habit of writing while working and remember the poems, come home and write them down, are they painted in my mind (~_~) nice write

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Idealized reality.

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