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Click hereMmm... I think the way you wrote it leads the reader toward the conclusion ("consciousness, bliss, peace") at a good pace. I like how you start using single words toward the end, it adds some urgency as it rushes to that final "O M"...
...not that I agree that all this merging leads to "bliss". But that isn't really important, is it? :)
About the "center" tag at the end, it seems like whomever put this poem online must have mistyped it (in this case, replaced a / with a dot). Maybe you should report it and ask to have it checked out.
Not in my original Poem !?
Wonder where it came from !?
hi, ash - i felt the use of the conjoined twins was probably the strength of this write: though 2 separate minds, with their own way of thinking, they need to work together as one in order to achieve. do i feel you belaboured the point as i read on through? yeah, a little. the mixing and blending of language felt natural to me, and its use (i'm assuming) was part of the 'eradicate/blend differences till they merge and become 'one'.