- Non-Erotic Poetry
- pale stripper
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death often waltzes in
when you're having a cigarette
or when you're drunk
or taking a nap
like a pale stripper
in a tight red dress
you're often driven
to an access of all three
For me it's usually
like a bum on the sidewalk
or a skunk on the highway
often getting your shoes wet
or dirty
is better then the smell
because we're still attracted
to the stripper
and the bum still needs a place to sleep
like all of us
still waiting
on earthly trumpets
- COMMENTS
PandoraGlittersover 15 years agoI like this construction and the comparisons are interesting. I've never been attracted to a pale stripper in a red dress, but I could get the image enough to get why someone might be. Good poem.
PandoraGlittersover 15 years agoI liked this. I wish I could tell you why. I think because it lures me in. The narrative is accessible yet unexpected.
WickedEveover 15 years agoYour poem has been recommended on literotica's poetry forum in the new poems review thread.
