Palermo, Wooden Floors

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Dusty wooden floors
and staring upwards
from inside the
abandoned church

Backpack lounge chairs
back to back
passing Palermo vino

Brick and morter frame
     heaven above
Passing over parish trees
now free to grow
within these walls

A sirens wail
leads off to shelled
     markets
bustling ruins,
motorino running
among stalls
     shuffling feet
fallen walls
     fade in the distance

Open Air

Our fingers brush
   with each
   drink

And I imagine I
   taste your lips
   on the bottle

(c) 2003 m.f.

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
Ending

The entire poem has some wonderful word choices. Unfortunately, some poems have weak endings, but this one certainly doesn't. The ending is more than satisfying for this reader.

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