Palest Pink

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Palest pink
my petals
soft

I am for you
pure, untouched
beneath
my palest pink

You breathe upon my legs
and gently lick
stroking down my side
kissing neck
caressing thigh...

These petals
sigh
releasing from the outside
to my core
they whisper

I've yearned
to hear
your moans
rise up
from crimson depths,
to slide within...
to feel your being
gasp
and lift

To be
forever
softly unto desperation
blooming
into one another

Countless petals
pink then crimson,
crimson, pink
one flower,
radiant,
eternal
sharing
through our depths
a single core.


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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

'crimson depths' - love that! Another great piece brimming with passion and yearning. Fabulous!

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
Did you erase my comment

Or did I screw up again? If you lose the last verse, imo, will be an excellent poem.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
nicely erotic

the third stanza is stronger that the first two--for me that is where the poem begins, but perhaps the first two build slowly to the third.