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Click herePalest pink
my petals
soft
I am for you
pure, untouched
beneath
my palest pink
You breathe upon my legs
and gently lick
stroking down my side
kissing neck
caressing thigh...
These petals
sigh
releasing from the outside
to my core
they whisper
I've yearned
to hear
your moans
rise up
from crimson depths,
to slide within...
to feel your being
gasp
and lift
To be
forever
softly unto desperation
blooming
into one another
Countless petals
pink then crimson,
crimson, pink
one flower,
radiant,
eternal
sharing
through our depths
a single core.
'crimson depths' - love that! Another great piece brimming with passion and yearning. Fabulous!
Or did I screw up again? If you lose the last verse, imo, will be an excellent poem.
the third stanza is stronger that the first two--for me that is where the poem begins, but perhaps the first two build slowly to the third.