Papaya Lane

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I'll show you the way down papaya lane,
to the place where the mangos grow,
then lead you astray in our little grass shack,
at the edge of a coconut grove.
 
We'll dance in the light of the tropical sun
to the music of butterfly wings,
as they dip their tongues in deep nectar wells,
making wax-petalled orchid blooms sing.

Come hula with me; sway those luscious hips,
in that sinuous way you dance.
Twisting your arms, in hypnotic swirls,
spin a libidinous trance.

Sweet lover of mine, I cannot deny,
the need that your presence inspires,
in my secret place of flower-lipped dew,
grown steamy in dark-eyed fires.

Now, lead me astray in our little grass shack
with your kisses of nectar-sweet wine,
and when the moon glints off the waves of the bay,
I'll love you and make you mine.
 

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6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Linnaen Appreciation

A charming short poem but it is unlikely to supplant Eisenberg's "Basic Tropical Botany". Deduction made because with one or two very minor adjustments it could scan rather better.

tungtied2utungtied2uabout 19 years ago
your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's late new poem reviews

sacksackabout 19 years ago
This poem just dances.....

off the printed page! Superb, and I don't think there are too many adjectives. The ones that are included are appropriately descriptive!!

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
this is very nice

though there are sections too abundant with adjectives. Honestly, a few less would be an improvement, in my opinion. By the way, the title is wonderful and the poem left me content.

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
comments were off

when I read this early this morning...yes, excellent poem, enjoyed it very much :)

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