- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Paper Doll
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Paper Doll
You fill my time
Say what I want
You don't speak your mind
You're a Barbie doll
Plastic
An untrue form
Your roots have been dyed since the day you were born
Little princess
The pea, does it hurt your back
I'm sorry it hurt you (or "I scare you")
Now get back in the sack
You're innocent, pure
Or so your Daddy believes
Now lick my left nut
Before I knock out your teeth
China doll
Broken, beyond repair
Your eyes are smeared out
Stringy is your hair
Paper doll
You're ripped in two
I'm leaving you now
To find someone new
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoLet me guess you slap your wife or girlfriend around for a shit poem lik this you must be, you should and every one like are truly the onse that deserves to go to hell and rout there.
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis sort of message delivered in a manner befitting the subject — raw, gritty, and hard-edged.
UnderYourSpellabout 16 years agoI enjoyed reading this easy to see the poor girl broken and abandoned although it's not an easy subject to stomach
Angelineabout 16 years agowhich sort of reminds me of a "dramatic monologue," a poetry form where the narrator reveals more of him- or herself than the suject of the poem. I do think it could stand some editorial changes to tighten it up, but overall it's good writing and a very interesting little story.
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
