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Click hereForever changing,
evolving,
tearing myself up
and putting myself back together.
A mercurial girl,
ripped out and cut up,
traceing the broken lines with a razorblade.
A flimsy, fragile paperdoll.
An old fashioned type of toy.
Stripped down,
naked
and exposed.
Dress her up in those vintage paper clothes.
A grown up woman
in a little girl's world.
Nice use of an extended metaphor to express something profound about "feminitity" and the feminine mind.
Succinct with excellent use of metaphor. You have an ear for rhythm and the poem flows well with lines such as 'A flimsy, fragile paperdoll.' and 'An old fashioned type of toy.'