- Non-Erotic Poetry
- passion revisited
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its what you make it,
its what i make of you
he said
a thin spun thread
of passion red
binding
reminder to never
forget as much
as you have shown to me
this light leaks through
thick clouds and dark
recesses of mind
mine over matter
constant chatter
of an intellect filled
with this man.
i can
see a hundred miles up
and there he is
above
4 degrees of energy
receiving
every second.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoIt's good to see your work again, 4. Another stellar poem written with a silent melody.
Reltnealmost 18 years agoWhy "reminder" instead of "reminding"? It supports your rhyme scheme better.
" . . .
binding
reminder to never
. . . "
Otherwise an interesting read.
