passion springs - a play(ing)

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passion on springs

a play (ing)

cotton covered springs

provide the stage

kisses of wonder

provide the fire

a two person theatre troupe

performs

with aid indeed

of jazz fuck music

act one has

the only rule directed

to be without clothing

is written in the script

the play proceeds

with hands and kisses

running amuck

stage left

no stage right

yes right there

right there

the stage is dark

only ears are needed

act three is filled

with wild breaths,

moans and screams

upon an entering spotlight

one would expect

fists and blood and bruises

but no

it is passion

sweet passion

every eye is on

center stage

act three turns

into four turns

into five, six

as the audience of plaster

grows weary as

the burning, scented wax

the symphony of fuck music

tired and crazed

flips to another composer

to which a glance

is not closely given

by the troupe of two

performing

final act ending

a finale like fireworks

a triumph of ecstasy

center stage empty

she bows stage left

and she the right

the curtain falls

bravos erupt

along with congratulatory smirks

opening night was

a brilliant and astounding

success

the audience fades

as the waxy spotlight is dimmed

the fire is smoldered

the cotton stage transforms

into a glorious

moon beamed

green room

of which the troupe rests

for their next performance

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With this passion's tale of two actresses;

Is it improv, perhaps?

A small suggestion:

"running amuck" would sound better as "run amuck"

More active, dynamic

And these two sound like they're throwing themselves into their craft.

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