- Erotic Poetry
- peach
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Click herea honeywheat hue and sunbaked smell her hair in a tail catching the wind flying past bared shoulders as she
throws her head back to laugh
her head back
she's laughing
head back like she's coming
i think of her coming mixing laughter and drawing
a
splinter
that wince, the furrow of her eyebrows
throat quivers in a lively vibrato lips glistening a shimmer pink the glitter winking intermittently with a
slender
wet
tongue
surpassed only by glowing skin soft matte china doll-white stained faintly peach
and, i suspect,
just as sweet
- COMMENTS
Tathagataalmost 20 years agothis alot.
Great phrasing and line breaks
and I love the end
Very nice
Thank you
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoRead this to yourself aloud - it's a lovely and smooth piece of erotica - a peach smoothie on a hot summer day. I would like MWG to make this an audio. It'd be a melter.
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoI didn't think this would be a poem I'd like, but I wrong. I like it very much. Wonderful images.
Maria2394almost 20 years agoat first I ws put off by the seemingly lack of structure but once I started reading, I realized that IS a structure, a good one, it flows, like warm peach juice dripping down a chin, :) enjoyed it very much, thanks :)
perksalmost 20 years agoignore the thermometer, I don't use it.
as for your poem. Loved it. The use of that long first line is perfectly read outloud. The reiteration of "head back" made me want to do it, and your overall imagery is spot on. I enjoyed the read, thanks.
