Pearls of Death

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wakingDown
wakingDown
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Hidden
Quiet and invisible within
     Arrival unannounced

Simple
Singular and ready to grow
     Building without bluster

Resolute
Steady and hard to stop
     Corrupting and spreading

Time
Enemy and option alike
     Revealing extent and effect

Cancer
Seed and poison joined
     Little pearls of death

wakingDown
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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
nothin more to add

just wanted to second Green mountaineers comment

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

This is really well written IMO. I liked the structure of the lines. The last 2 stanzas were outstanding, although I might have actually left out "cancer" giving the reader the "aha" identifying it by means of deduction.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
THIS COULD BE A PRELUDE TO BIRTH

and on to infinity TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
True ....

Sad but so true.......