Pecking Order

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We've got it figured out
the dog and I
can explain the situation.

It's like this, we rank
somewhere behind
Tivo'd boxing and NASCAR.

The dog and I
found the remote, wedged
between recliner cushions.

We purchased extra beer
new batteries and left him
a note in the kitchen-

Lasagna, microwave on high
3 minutes, remove plastic lid,
stir.

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8 Comments
Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

'and stir' indeed, how did I miss this poem? My loss, it is so good, why the hell it didn't get one of those green thingies is beyond me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WE is right

The dog and I. The poem is built around this phrase. It is so good I winced. I wish i could write like this .It seems to come so easily but I know this is real talent and practice working together.

ishtat

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterover 14 years ago
Wonderful to see a new poem ...

... from one of the best poets on the site! You say so much in a few, well-chosen words. Excellent, if poignant, poem.

Flora

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 14 years ago
Ouch!

If you substitute Red Sox for NASCAR, I'm red faced.

Delightful poem!

WickedEveWickedEveover 14 years ago
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"The dog and I" is a great phrase, for me, in this poem. I picture you and the dog together, like a couple of girlfriends who are talking about your man and deciding what to do about the situation.

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