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Click hereThe river belt
Hugging closer and closer
Each day reticent forest
Floating across
Pedestians wave
Arms hands fists
Facing the river
No car honks
No truck blinks
Thick and heartless it blows on
Stopping,
I am raising two arms,
One frog
One local dog
Another sympathetic bird
All frozen bronze
Readying to jump and multiply
To the right word, divine ordinance
By forgetful divinity or
Some local action committee
I make it to the top safely
Now coming down should be easy
Thank god for small miracles
You should know to always capitalize the first letter in every sentence which you didn't. It should have been "You" not "you". Also, your second sentence is not complete so you should have put a comma at the end of the first sentence. Sounds like you need to go back to skool!!!!!
you inadvertently left out the "r" in pedestrians.
heart and hugs
normal jean
The more I read of you, the better you get. I enjoyed this poem, from the structure to your choice of words.
keep up the good work :)
NJ
i read "divine ordnance" instead of ordinance. interesting accident, on my part, but a lovely poem, on yours. thanks.