Petals

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Petals floating in the wind
Petals that now brush my skin
Petals that brush me end to end

Petals floating in the breeze
Petals swirling round my knees

Petals that he’ll use to tease
Petals that he’ll use to please
Petals my memory will never leave


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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
NOW THAT'S EROTIC...

and steamy, sensual what an image and a feeling you convey here, i got goose bumps as i felt the soft touch of the petals on my skin...

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
Nice words

I can smell the sensuality!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Beautiful.

Nicely conveys drifting and delicate sensuality.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
petal

a drift~

cute poem~ great word play

excellent literary Art~

~photoguy~~photoguy~about 19 years ago
well done !!

yummy .. nice imagery, great work!!

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