Philip is moving away

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Philip is moving away.

Today he stopped by
and he gave me
a horseshoe
for good luck.

Well, we both know what that means.

Just remember,
he reminded me,
a good fairy
gave this to you.

Thanks, Philip, and I won’t forget.



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WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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What a tease of a poem. Leaves me wondering about Phillip. Some poets feel the need to tell everything. Sometimes it's what you don't say that makes for a good poem.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 18 years ago
Double take

this poem can be read so many ways, each as powerful as the next....it can be hopeful or sad....a poem for all seasons....thanks Steve.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Awww ~

Such a feeling of sadness.

I love the poems that reach in an

tapp on your heart.

Great imagery, and bittersweet move ...

Here ... is to friendship,

My Friend ~ * Smiles *

Love this * Feeling * poem ~

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeover 18 years ago
Bitter-sweet

With the delicacy and homey feeling feeling of a diary entry. I HOPE the large blank space was put there by design, because it is the perfect counterpoint.

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