Pillow Talk

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Pillow Talk

Groggy sleep pulls on my lids
I slide them open and persist
In floating your face all around
I smile at how our hips were ground
Imagining deep bliss for us
Just passion with no mortal fuss
Seduction in the corner store
Hoping sleep will show me more
Of us entangled by our lust
Swept away by moving trust
Both knowing where our pleasure's found
Racing to get the other downed
Here slowly comes the sweeping mist
Bringing me your sultry kiss.


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Found in my old Arizona rehab journal from 03/01/2008 <3

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bl0ndedbl0ndedover 12 years agoAuthor
Pleasant (?)

Thanks for the compliment :) and if you ever return, oh erotanon, would you care to explain what you didn't like of those lines?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pleasent

Line three and line eleven do not work.

Otherwise quite good.