- Erotic Poetry
- Pink Lady (Apple Challenge)
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sundrenched sweetness
dripping honey dew
tease my tongue
savor summer's
salty tang
slippery lips
juices running
slurping sugar
hunger sated.
- COMMENTS
The Mystery Valiantalmost 18 years agoYou color the poem sweetly and place your lines courageously. I would call to make this a more of a mid-line poem. Not really talking to the reader, more like hypnotizing them. I don't see the central object as before, but right here, I don't think it quite fits. I have to understand just what is the heart of the poem.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agommmm delicious! I have a sudden craving for ripe fruit :)
~thanks for playing along with this challenge!
~annaswirls
