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My snake is old
Hunts rarely
Lies in wait
Plays unfairly
Spits
Venom loosing potency
Fangs dull
Hides when it's cold
Eats tender young mice
For breakfast, lunch...
Midnight snacks
Happiest when stuffed
in a dark hole
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normal jeanover 10 years agogreat poem
loved your metaphor that wasn't clogged up with worn out clichés. Thoroughly enjoyable :)
NJ
