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njoyjade
njoyjade
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Weeds in a garden
weeds in the lawn;
Pull them, spray them,
 curse them at dawn.

Kaleidoscope vision
will only see;
Seeds for a bird,
flowers for the bee.

njoyjade
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demure101demure101over 10 years ago
Beautiful!

And funny - Mmmm!

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Weeds...

...are maligned, to hell with manicured lawns and Home 'n Garden flower beds, Let the kaleidoscopic world flourish. Voted, natch.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Short and to the point

and that second quatrain is wonderful because a kaleidoscope does break an image into bits of image. I saw exactly what you wanted me to see. That's good! Glad you are around again. :-)

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Seriously

I usually object to words like

"Kaleidoscope"

Here it kind of makes the poem, hmmm what does she mean by....

5ed

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
njoy, good to see you

pull 'em don't spray 'em ....enough poison in the world . 5 smiles.

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