tagErotic PoetryPlease Take Me Deep

Please Take Me Deep


Please take me deep, melt me in love's crucible,
pour my seed white hot and molten inside you,
mold me to the shape that brings you pleasure,
a perfect instrument to play sweet music of desire,
so rich and pure that the heavens shake and angels cry

Please take me deep into your loving heart
till fire flows through your gently trembling loins
to wake your aching body to my lusty lover's call
and fill your dreams with visions of carnal delights
raised high to rival the celestial dance of eternity

Please take me deep and never let go of me
kiss me hard, and part my hungry lips with your tongue
press your firm proud breasts to my face and suckle me
grab hold of my hair, and guide my mouth down you
to drink my fill from you till I am drunk with the divine

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