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Click herePLEASING YOU
Lay back relax and close your eyes,
Getting on my knees as I watch your nature rise.
Unbuckling your belt and unzipping your pants,
Probing with my eyes, caressing with my hands.
You look so good as your manhood stands up hard and strong,
Don’t worry I know what I’m doing, I won’t do anything wrong.
With the flicker of my tongue I slide across the head,
Licking in circular motion as I feel you squirm in bed.
Engulfing your hardness deep in my mouth,
Your hips rise and you are enjoying this without a doubt.
Sucking and slurping up and down,
Your moans become louder, your heart begins to pound.
Thrusting forward as you make love to my face,
My head bobs faster in a rhythmic pace.
Using my right hand to help bring you to ecstasy,
As my left hand starts to probe inside of me.
I feel you getting harder as I continue to please you,
My fingers go deeper as I am very excited too.
Your body stiffens as you are unable to hold on,
On baby, give it to me now, don’t make me wait long.
Your stomach muscles contract as you release yourself and let it go,
Hot cream splashes on my tonsils and slides down my throat.
I continue to gulp every little drop,
As your eyes roll in your head I still cannot stop.
Continuously I suck until you collapse on the bed,
I love pleasing you, a kiss to your lips and one the head.
dafÓ1990
A good concept but I think you are getting caught up in sentence structure. This is poetry. Don't write sentences. Write images.