Pleasure

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Feverish at first
Your lips meet mine
And you can't get enough of my
Slippery,
Unrestrained
Passion

You
Match
My
Fervor

Hands play and grasp
You push yourself into me

Fingers roll across soft lips
Teasing with every touch
Along your neck I place well timed kisses
You tense and relax, surprised and embracing
My hands run down, down into you

Giving it up
Giving in
Some call it a sin
What's yours is mine
What's mine is yours

Your body writhes and envelopes me
I want to give you a release, make you feel me
I will read your mind, make you yield to me like
Water...

...lubricious...
Heavy Breaths
The air is humid around you
Your heat and sweat dissipate, and I float...

...down into your fog...

Take me down, show me everything
I shake and shudder and feel
Toes curl
Muscles tighten
Sinking, Melting, Tingling
Ecstasy
Relief from my frustration

We lift the darkness with our afterglow
And kiss a lover's kiss
Rapt and lusty

...and we share more excited dreamy indulgence as the daybreak drifts across the indigo sky...

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atomic_curvesatomic_curvesabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments!

I take everything into consideration since this is my first time submitting my work. Thanks, again!

countrobcountrobabout 10 years ago
Mmmmm!!!

Full of heart and sexual passion. I feel quite tired!

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
I liked the whole thing

Gave me a sense of seduction over riding indecisiveness, building passion

todski28todski28about 10 years ago
I like this

but almost feel like the first half can be trimmed out and start the poem at .

....lubricious, just some thoughts, but a solid write that got better as it went along.