- Non-Erotic Poetry
- poem about a sort of death.
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untamed, unassigned
a name or place within
watch from behind as
it all begins, again
my beautiful friend
spent time never ends
as i let this bastard planet
feed on perfection
aligned affection with
radiation glares and laser
like stares, humane euthanasia
and unfounded fears
a mass worm hole suicide
disguised and smiling while
eating chocolate cyanide.
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyover 17 years agoI love the imagery and wording here.
Leon is right, the flow is smooth as silk,
one would never notice till the end
they are being cut to ribbons~
I love it !!!
LeBrozover 17 years agoHere we have more a dark hole than a worm hole,
Or better yet, a black hole of depression
Where life gets sucked down into oblivion;
And what's better is it's not obvious until it's too late.
Anonymousover 17 years agoSome great imagery to behold, loved the lines
'a mass worm hole suicide
disguised and smiling while
eating chocolate cyanide'
delicious atmosphere, mentioned in today's new poem reviews
