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2rivers
2rivers
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lolly red pop awesome cascading hair
with bustle intellect and at times
in dark night headlights hustle
sharp shadowed sting,
a subtle mix of pain jagged
pain on demand for display
only one bravo, only one lover
only two minds for the copulation
of it all, what it means, what pants
fall for leaning over hot hoods
boy with wishes and the faultless
mindful partner, wonder soaked,
sew and so and sew our lips secure

2rivers
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jenny_katytdidjenny_katytdidalmost 4 years ago
you

I love you I miss you I thank you every day

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
YDD

maybe that is the point

not everything or everyone fits together

in a nice package

Thank God

and thank god that *someone* can capture this truth in a beautiful poem,

without just saying something simple and obvious like

"Not everything fits together into a nice package." and then rhyme what rhymes with package anyway

with meter and a pretty little couplet at the end....

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
disConcerting poem

Full of phrases and jumbled concepts.

I see your words and images,

but find them difficult to assemble into a whole.

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