- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Poetry Reading Blues
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Click hereWhiskey sang from the
mouth reading the pages
covered with patterns
of spilt drinks.
Listening to him
I see empty barstools
in the dark spaces
between his thoughts
and watch him think
“I’M STILL STANDING!”
as he lay face down
in his own vomit.
- COMMENTS
LuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years agothere ya go...you made it to the new poem reviews...
good job BD
**HUGS**
T
Anonymousover 18 years agolittle write. I liked the second stanza, quite a suggestive image. I think you should consider rewriting the first stanza, it didn't read very well compared to the other two.
