- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Poet's Corner
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and determined
to get it right
I work
and I slave
throughout the night
breathe relax breathe listen
Kicking
and screaming
I came into this place
Sitting
and squealing
they come at their own pace
shudder sigh shudder pant
Curiosity
has killed,
what got out of the bag;
Vicariousness
has thrilled,
lying on purple shag
- COMMENTS
Trent_Dutchabout 19 years agoYour Poem has been mentioned on the new Poem reviews thread for Tuesday 8th of February. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoNicely written, Remec. Flowed smoothly..
Although, I probably would have either separated the words into different lines--> "breathe relax breathe listen" OR put commas in between them. Same with "shudder sigh shudder pant"
Other than that, excellent!
WickedEveabout 19 years agoWhat are you doing with my sit-n-squeal and my purple shag? Those are sacred. :) Cute poem inspired by a weird place.
annaswirlsabout 19 years agoyes I have been in that corner....
:)
the purple shag cracked me up. ours is maroon
