Pointing North ~

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Pointing north
swinging south.
Flop that cock,
right into
my mouth.

Swinging it high,
grinding so low.
Melting insides,
hard n slow.

Bouncing balls,
slapping that ass.
Baby, show me
no class.

Teach this student,
naughty, wanton things.
Slam into this puss,
till it sings.

Slow it down,
feel tha sizzle.
No stoppin now,
till we fizzle.

Engorged balls deflate,
with our screaming release.
Thanks to your cock,
and out joint caprice.

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WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
Since you're accepting public feedback,

I'd like to offer my opinion. It is a poem, and it's certainly appropriate for this site, but I honestly feel like this is below average. I have read better from you. A poem like this is so easy to write. I'd love to see you challenge yourself a bit more. Of course, you may be here just for fun, and that's fine too. :)

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
NASTY .. NASTY ..

*winks*

shame on you !!!

telling the truth like this !

very HOttttttttt, little number

RF, and very naughty,

complete loss of inhibition,

and now we all need

showers****..

{smile}

sGp

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

This may be trite,

but who'd a thunk,

naughty could be so nice?

sacksackover 18 years ago
"out joint caprice"

like that line especially! Raw and effective!

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