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Click hereHe pushes her hard,
Her hands against the wall,
His chest to her back,
His breath on her neck.
He moves his hands,
Down her arms,
And covers her hands,
with his.
He parts her legs,
With a nudge from his knee,
Stepping between them,
He moves to enter her.
Hands moving down her sides,
The exposed flesh of her flanks.
And on their languid stroll,
Back up the notches of her spine.
Taking her by the hair,
At the nape of her neck,
Pulling her head back,
And leaning close.
Singing in her ear,
Whispered melodies,
and sweet obscenities,
To the drum beat of his hips.
Trickles of sweat form,
In the cup of her back,
Her knees buckle,
As his rhythm bears down.
Their bodies entwined,
Their breathing in time,
As in raptures grasp,
They echo the divine.
Whew!!! now thats the way to write them, sensual, erotic and right to the point with very few words. (wish they would post poem on here so you could look over it when you make comments) The description made me shiver!
You captured the essence of the relationship and of the moment so vividly. I enjoyed your poem very much, thanks.
msboy8