primary & sufficient cause

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               the      give
of her resilient thighs
compressed in thrust
is      close      not quite
enough but then   O
comes her low feral moan


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unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijoualmost 16 years ago
Hottest thing you've written yet

Damn, that is really, really evocative. My personal grail has always been to write the poem that actually inspires orgasm just from the words on the page.

You got close here. Damn close.

normal jeannormal jeanabout 16 years ago
I agree with LeBroz

the entire poem becomes erotic at the very end. You are an intriguing poet and I have enjoyed everything of yours I have read so far. Can't say that about too many poets, lol.

NJ

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Her moan makes me wonder why this isn't listed as erotic.

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