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Click hereThe first fish
We share 98% of our
to limp its way
genes with
out of the primordial sea
chimpanzees, who eat
saw the white billowing clouds,
babies.
a paradise of hope.
experiment, two lines that don't converge. These lines are know by me, how many others care? In short, you lost most of the potential readers by line two. Not developed enough, and not completely thought out.
Despite all that I left a five, I did have to stop and think.