- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Product and Packaging
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patriots and eagles
balls and heroism
lightbulbs and cotton gins
robots and space-rockets
what it all comes down to
Product and Packaging
beauty and nudity
vows and veil
realism and post-colonialism
dog and tail
what it all comes down to
Product and Packaging
capitalism and populism
abortion and homeland
tantric healing and feng shui
power yoga on e-bay
the machinery's calibrated-
even unto perfection.
the earth is being harvested
in a lucrative dissection.
a plethora of products,
without any heart;
a world of packaging,
without any art.
We know what we might become
but not who we are.
- COMMENTS
Trent_Dutchabout 19 years agoYour poem is mentioned in the New Poems Review Thread for Tuesday 8th of February.
sackabout 19 years agois that not all of your pairs fit the packaging/product scheme. The Eagles were not the packaging for the Patriots product, they are simply rivals. Same as for dog-tail. Yet, you could say nudity is the "package" for beauty and the veil is the "package" for the vow. So, some of the pairs work to support the premise, some don't. This appears to weaken the poem, as does a somewhat wordy 2nd half compared to the very concise earlier stanzas.
