Profoundly Crude or Crudely Profound ?
you who combine
common sense wisdom and beauty
can't care less or feel any duty
to appreciate anybody's peasant ways
or the raw power of his brain
we talked and danced and talked some more
suddenly you were at the door
you asked right questions and got my eager answers
you learned a little nor did i learn a lot
you already crossed the parking...
we have talked for a short time
but too long -
i didn't match your skills
now that there are only me an i
we reach a clear profound conclusion
we like your smooth pragmatic ways
your intelligence and your beauty
we can't care less about our peasant days
we're free from self-delusion
and me and i agree on any night
and me and i agree on any day
that the memory of the unbelievably good warmth of your body
with i and me will stay
wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1984-09-3/4
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