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Profoundly Crude or ...

bySenna Jawa©

     Profoundly Crude or Crudely Profound ?



     you who combine
     common sense wisdom and beauty
     can't care less or feel any duty
     to appreciate anybody's peasant ways
     or the raw power of his brain

     we talked and danced and talked some more
     suddenly you were at the door
     you asked right questions and got my eager answers
     you learned a little nor did i learn a lot
     you already crossed the parking...
     we have talked for a short time
     but too long -
     i didn't match your skills

     now that there are only me an i
       we reach a clear profound conclusion

     we like your smooth pragmatic ways
     your intelligence and your beauty
     we can't care less about our peasant days
     we're free from self-delusion

     and me and i agree on any night
     and me and i agree on any day
     that the memory of the unbelievably good warmth of your body
     with i and me will stay





wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
       1984-09-3/4

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