- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Proposal
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Click hereIf I offered you the sun,
Would it warm you?
Would you accept it?
If I offered you the moon
Would it light you?
Would you take it?
If I offered you the stars
Would they charm you?
Would you have them?
If I offered you wealth
Would it enrich you?
Would you want it?
If I offered you fame
Would it excite you?
Would you endure it?
If I offered you my heart
Would it enfold you?
Would you cherish it?
If I offered you my soul
Would it touch you?
Would you touch it?
If I offered you my love,
Would it move you,
Would you want it?
If I offered you myself
Would you want me?
Would you accept me?
- COMMENTS
LadyJeannealmost 19 years agoin the offer, yet sad in the questioning. Love freely given doesn't automatically mean it will be accapted - you speak of truth. Great work, mat. Thanks. LJ
Jennifer Cabout 19 years agoI loved it, it touched me and moved me, this is a poem i know i will come back to time after time and take comfort in. Good work
mummys dirty angelabout 19 years agoAs you read it, it gently pulls you in until the last 3 lines... and then it sucks you right in! Reading the last 3, i had to remind myself to breathe, lump in the throat moment. xxx
Bridget69about 19 years agoClearly speaks of hope and of what the person is willing to offer. Nicely done!
