Prostitute

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You sit
sprawled back
relaxed
and bored
eyes glazed
glassy and red
mouth slack
cigarette poised
hanging loosely
from your lips
thick smoke
curling
dark fog
drifting from
your mouth
your breasts
exposed
and bruised
legs
open wide
naked
body sore
muscles tired
from hours of
overuse
used by men
object
of pleasure
never pleased
empty soul
filling
the void
with dense
gray smoke

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
One long damn sentence

I saw nothing that gave this an 'E' except the form.

I never would of read this had it been say 10 lines.

About the 4th time I read it I figured I had changed my

mind. The sum of this is greater than all the parts.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Very moving

I had the picture perfectly before you told us who she was. Brilliant.

mentioned in Wednesday Review

doormousedoormouseabout 19 years ago
wow

Congrats!! I can see why you got the E

Awesome!! ;-)

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
:)

Congrats on the E. I like how you come back to the dense gray smoke at the end of the poem.

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