- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Psalms 4:3
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Click hereI still believe in fairy tales. Dark ones with voo-doo and blood. I went to Mexico to see the Mayan ruins. A storm so sinister came. I felt the undercurrent and thought I could name it. Hold on to it. All of the puzzle pieces fit. Then they all detached like plate tectonics. I felt joy, exaltations! The North and South came to an amicable agreement. The war was truly over. Men were with women and babies were being born.
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susansnowalmost 11 years agoAuthorI've considered the chapbook route. I have a couple of larger pieces in the same vein as these that I've consider breaking up into sections. I might, one day. Thanks so much for your feedback and comments.
Angelinealmost 11 years agoand doesn't have quite the punch therefore. Still, I absolutely love this:
"All of the puzzle pieces fit. Then they all detached like plate tectonics."
It would be fascinating to see a whole bunch of these poems together, like a chapbook. Ever considered that?
