Erotic PoetryPulseTwo souls,one cardiac hymn.
Perfect rhythmic unison,among exterior differences.
Beauty eminent in our contrasting skin.
Flawlessly ensnared in a montage of limbs,
Intimacy holds no truer form.
Your lips like the inside of a rose,hold vast allure.
Yearning of the closest diction,
Describing the electric between two.
Reality quickly submissive to euphoric hysteria.
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Huh?
A hymn is a type of song silly your thinking of hymen
COULD THIS ALL HAPPEN
while within the womb. TK U MLJ LV NV
Rather good
I like it. Avoidance of cliche and a good word selection gives a heightening effect. The scansion is slightly off in places but I'm rather old-fashioned when it comes to poetry and that's a somewhat minor criticism. Thanks for posting it.more...
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