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Click hereIn my mind
the world extends
beyond the physical.
You are there.
We have a boy and a girl.
Life is perfect.
The kids play
in mud and water.
and happily, we watch them grow.
In reality
There is nothing.
I survive like cactus with no purpose.
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tarablackwood22almost 20 years agoVery....
....happy to see you back. This poem is crisp, very well-handled. How about some more?
Tathagataalmost 20 years agoIntense
says so much in with so littel
That last stanza is great
Good to see you back
Thank you
