Putain, Salope - Slut

Poem Info
284 words
4
3.5k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

Onscreen I see you now.
A distant memory of a love that was.

Eyes wide open, fixed upon the lens,
Your face contorts into a snarl,
Your upper lip now curled above the teeth.

Between your open legs,
Your hirstute slit slides up and down the chrome vibrator,
Leaving a creamy residue.

The camera moves in closer,
As your hungry cunt devours the silver dildo, engulfing it,
Then charts a path toward your breasts
Where first one nipple, then the other is tightly squeezed between forefinger and thumb,
Stretching each in turn to dark brown swollen fullness.
You tweak and stretch them hard,
Sucking in air through clenched teeth.

Adorned in belt and stockings,
Eternal symbol of the bedroom slut.
Eyes fixed upon the camera lens,
You reach out with your tongue
To lick the passing air.

The hand held standing cock is rubbed against your cheek.
Your tongue laps at it.
Now at your nipple, its swollen tip is rubbed against your breast.
Your smile once more contorts, as you encircle hot hard meat with
Delicate fingers and begin to frig its length.
The dildo thrusts in rhythm to your strokes,
Your cunt arched upward to receive its form.

Your sighs increase, betraying imminent release.
The stiff cock twitches in your hand.
As you expire through bitten lip, a shower of seed explodes into the
Air, and comes to rest upon your face, your neck, your breasts.

Then as you relax, your right hand harvests pearly substance from your breast
And smears it slowly down between your legs.
You turn once more to face the lens and smile,
Waving a greeting with your tongue.

The French say 'putain' or 'salope'.

I say Slut

Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
1 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
~

The last two lines were unique-- the rest read through a scene many of us have seen many times.... if you are serious about writing, iI would suggest trying to make this scene more personalized, how was it different than the rest of these scenes? is there something you can add to make these people more real, attached to a personality. The scene was described well, can you make us feel something for the characters? As I said, the last two lines Do this as you give a cynical twist.

Thanks for sharing this-- hope you do not mind my crfitique, I see promise in your writing, and look forward to more

annaswirls

Share this Poem