tagNon-Erotic PoetryPutting In Time

Putting In Time



By BARUSHKO © 2004

Robin red,
wind-dripped, scary –faced, luster
after shadows

not-there thing; all cradled
in her disco-shook heart

The sudden warmth a bear
crushing the night

“Take me home,” they chorus,
interrupting each other;
it stops the night!

“Don’t tell me babe,” she
says on the phone

Filling these shadow
holes with clones
dulls the pain

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