- Erotic Poetry
- Quarter-moon
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Click hereThe white arc
Gleamed
Against the
Night's musky blue
Tantalisingly
Lewdly perfect
4 our tryst
My hand reached
Up &
Up
& pulled it down
So the quarter-moon
Is now
My Lady's dildo
Previously published in “The Arizona Unconservative.”
- COMMENTS
WickedEvealmost 16 years agoInteresting poem. I like it but not so much the last few lines. Maybe a slight change: the quarter-moon/is now her dildo. Your use of "4" and "&" is okay. I don't usually like them in poems but sometimes it works.
champagne1982almost 16 years agoThere are many folks who'd disagree with the way I feel about this poem. It's good but I really don't feel the text shortcuts used here should be used in a poem unless it's for a contest or a specific publication that showcases them. Ampersands et al are invasive enough in society that to pepper a form of already minimal writing with them seems excessive. As I said, there are thankfully, other people who don't share my views.
