Queer Made Devine

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Sweetly sighing

sweat is dripping

I am unmistakably yours.

You are my swollen soldier

and I, your soft sinner,

begging for pennance

yet damming redemption.

I am baptized in your eyes

and annointed by your hands

I am made angel by a demon

take flight to heaven

on wings of your breath on my neck

sweetly sighing.

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Queer Made Devine

The sibilancy of the sounds is enjoyable,

and I enjoy the phrase "on wings of your breath".

Keep writing.

Joseki KoJoseki Koalmost 20 years ago
Extremely

Nice.

Thanks

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I like

the contradictions here.

Nice images and word play

thank you

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