Questioning He

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He found me in Darkness,
He was Teacher,Lover ,Muse and Guide.
He said He’d never leave
He said O/our love would never die.

But He left……left me all alone
Never knowing which corner to turn,
never knowing where to go.

Then one day He returned,
like the Phoenix rising through the ashes,
Isn’t it funny how slowly time sometimes passes?.

my Dark Knight as returned to me….
Will it be as before?......or will He leave my soul to bleed?.

Days,weeks and months pass ,
i guess W/we shall have to see,
But in time i am certain the answer will reveal itself to me.

He no longer feels as He did before,
Or does He? i really don’t know,
It just feels like He doesn’t,or as much anymore.

my Dark Love
One whom has been Teacher,Lover and Guide,
All i ask…..i beg….is i hope O/our love will last eternally.

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Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Strongly expresses...

a lot of hopeful uncertainty throughout.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
interesting piece

I'm not sure I understand

what you were aiming for,

but you have some lovely

ideas and I think this

has lots of potential!

Thanks.

~ J

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