- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Quicksand
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
Such a nice man, so clean
cut, hair neat
as a display garden in May.
He even paid for dinner
and too many
drinks
on our first date and I thought
This may be the guy.
A week later, our first night,
he held my hands together
over my head
and I liked it
so much I let him tie my wrists
later that evening.
That was when I stepped
into the pit,
the soft, soft ground that engulfs you,
from which you can’t get out again.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineeralmost 7 years agoThis is smart, Ellen, as so many of your poems are.
The reader is left with a question: Was this desirable or not? For those so inclined, yes; for those not, no. That's a wide range. Any poem that encompasses that is a good poem IMO.
It does, however, present a parodox: Lit asks you to ID a submission as either erotic or non-erotic when, in fact it can be either according to the reader's need.
