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Shouting
Cant feel anymore
So hurtful are your actions
So painful are your words
Laying down, bare at your feet
Trying to convince myself
That I am truely wanted here
Wanting to kill this relationship
Wishing I could bite
Wishing I could scratch
Wanting you to stop being so blind
to what you are puting me through
I hate him
You cant leave
Try to tell me
That I am special
It is a lie
That you tell me to stay
I cant live this way
Raging!
Why do you strip me down
To my naked heart
Just to put a knife in so deep
Buliding me up
Breaking me down
Crumbling into myself
Awakening the evil
You say I am special
How can you tell me so
You have forgotten what we used to be?
Telling me what you do for him
Letting me sink
Back to the beast
Seeing blood red
Wishing you soul would fade
Your jelous of nothing
You want my pity
As you resurect
The way I was before
Lingering!
Feeling like a phantom
Not even a memory
You are not who I want you to be
Drowning in the pool of your ignorance
Falling so fast to the hell you banish me
Waiting for you to tell me to go
At least then my mind wouldnt burst
- COMMENTS
buttersabout 13 years agothis certainly feels angry.
despair and frustration all balled up together to make an angry, self-pitying rant of a piece.
but
whilst the narrator might be supposed to be raging, the author needs to exercise control before submitting in order to eliminate sloppy typos.
