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Click hereI hear the beat of the rain,
One with the pounding heart,
Nature and man called as one,
Never soon to depart.
The answer is simple,
The call of the rain,
Drumming of blood,
Now truly sane.
Release and let go,
Time is a myth,
Truth soon to flow,
Love the true gift.
Rain slowly wanes,
The moment,
A second,
Slows down my brain.
Breathing in harmony,
Lost and true,
Answers before me,
Rising out of the blue.
Release and let go,
Go with the flow,
Time is a myth,
Love to sow.
Hold onto nothing,
Forget the past,
Future lies dormant,
Follow the path.
Ignorance breeds pain,
Listen to the rain,
Your heart speaks the truth,
When joined with your brain.
One with the world,
Time is a myth,
Truth soon to flow,
Love the true gift.
Dlt copyright Aug 15 2004 all rights reserved
Very nice, Miss Du Loc. I could feel the mist on my face.
One thing, tho. "go with the flow"? That was a jarring bit of un-originality. The risk we run when we rhyme.
wow Du this one's awesome
rain ?
very well written
clever and curious
vague in the greatest since!
excellent poem~
I think it was one of your poems I recently commented on and said that you did well with the rhyme in that poem. But with this poem, I'd love to see it as free verse. I think it could possibly be an improvement.
With the emphasis on living in the present. I will treasure this poem!