Rain

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Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers

I hear the beat of the rain,
One with the pounding heart,
Nature and man called as one,
Never soon to depart.

The answer is simple,
The call of the rain,
Drumming of blood,
Now truly sane.

Release and let go,
Time is a myth,
Truth soon to flow,
Love the true gift.

Rain slowly wanes,
The moment,
A second,
Slows down my brain.

Breathing in harmony,
Lost and true,
Answers before me,
Rising out of the blue.

Release and let go,
Go with the flow,
Time is a myth,
Love to sow.

Hold onto nothing,
Forget the past,
Future lies dormant,
Follow the path.

Ignorance breeds pain,
Listen to the rain,
Your heart speaks the truth,
When joined with your brain.

One with the world,
Time is a myth,
Truth soon to flow,
Love the true gift.

Dlt copyright Aug 15 2004 all rights reserved

Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers
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The MuttThe Muttabout 19 years ago
Rhymers of the world unite!

Very nice, Miss Du Loc. I could feel the mist on my face.

One thing, tho. "go with the flow"? That was a jarring bit of un-originality. The risk we run when we rhyme.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
excellent poem~

wow Du this one's awesome

rain ?

very well written

clever and curious

vague in the greatest since!

excellent poem~

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
quite good

I think it was one of your poems I recently commented on and said that you did well with the rhyme in that poem. But with this poem, I'd love to see it as free verse. I think it could possibly be an improvement.

sacksackabout 19 years ago
This is so "zen"!

With the emphasis on living in the present. I will treasure this poem!

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