Rain

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Face-to-face, knees
pressing into wet grass,
you cling to me.

I sip rainwater
from your lips;
your fingers fanned
around my throat
as I swallow.

I am awash in your
love.

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5 Comments
WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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"your fingers fanned/around my throat/as I swallow" is a great image.

sassynycsassynycalmost 16 years ago
ahhh......

rain and a pair of hot lips! you managed to work two of my favorite things into a nicely wrapped package. has a soothing feel to it.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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I've said it before, nothing makes an erotic image more powerful than a natural setting.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
more panhteistic erotica!

I would go and sing in the rain if I were not afraid to catch a cold but this is wonderful; almost pornographic but how can rain be pornographic?

AngelineAngelinealmost 16 years ago
Your Poem

has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!