Raincoat

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oneiria
oneiria
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Oh, to reach out
with her liver-spotted claws

to touch the girl's soft, young
alabaster skin

and rip it from her shoulders,
then wrap it around herself

like a raincoat,
to be touched by eager young hands

exploring every fold and buckle,
then shed it

like a snake
before the storms begin.

oneiria
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PoetGuyPoetGuyalmost 13 years ago
Interesting.

The imagery is kind of creepy, but certainly vivid and the closing is quite good. Poet Guy does not understand why the poem is centered--that seems to be just affectation to him--and "alabaster" is perhaps too stale in this context to be effective. Overall, quite interesting.

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