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Click hereto touch the girl's soft, young
alabaster skin
and rip it from her shoulders,
then wrap it around herself
like a raincoat,
to be touched by eager young hands
exploring every fold and buckle,
then shed it
like a snake
before the storms begin.
The imagery is kind of creepy, but certainly vivid and the closing is quite good. Poet Guy does not understand why the poem is centered--that seems to be just affectation to him--and "alabaster" is perhaps too stale in this context to be effective. Overall, quite interesting.